These days, people change careers several times during their life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Nowadays, the approach of
switiching
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switching
jobs frequently has risen in
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alternating
of
single
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stable job.
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essay provides both the
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benefits
and
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drawbacks
that
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such
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. On
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the positive
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side,
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crucial
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the advantage
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of changing in the career you can follow the passion.
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is because
people
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who trend to monotonous job, usually get stuck in the
employement
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employment
unemployment
they do not want growth.
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, one of my friend who works in
IT
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the IT
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sector left his company, and start his own
bussiness
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business
, and now his only person became famous
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business
bussiness
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the bussiness
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sector. If he had not left his profession may not get
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reputation. Not only
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, but better opportunity in is one of
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the major
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reason. It is very
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for some
people
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to manage the expense, and a profession switch
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them with
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a bump
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up to income. On
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the negative
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side, the most
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obvious
of which is lack of mental peace.
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it is quite possible for some
people
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to adjust in the position.
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Furthermore
, change the stream can
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sometimes
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prove wrong and it may lead to
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down
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to their career.
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, If
person
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a person
the person
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is
expercined
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experienced
in IT
departement
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department
departments
for 15
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years
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he
want
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to change his job to photograph it may lead to him into the unstable income. In conclusion, changing the career has advantage and disadvantage but it will
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be based
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on the
people
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descion
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design
section
.
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