Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

There are individuals who follow the lifestyle

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a vegan, and they claim that

this

will

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beneficial

benefit

to their

bodies

and the environment.

This

essay will discuss

this

statement and put forward my personal perspectives.

To begin

with, I firmly agree that a

meat

-free diet will undoubtedly reduce the cases of animal abuse. Obviously,

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animal products' demand leads to less killing. According to my

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knowledge

, the largest cluster of

meat

factories and companies are greedy and profit-driven. These corporations keep

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domestic

livestocks

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livestock

in a dense and dirty environment in order to

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the expense.

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amount of medication intoxicates animals and customers' health. For all these reasons, consuming more vegetables

instead

of

meat

significantly helps to save our planet in many

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aspects

.

On the other hand

, there is a widely disputed concern that eating only fruits and vegetables may not be an ideal way of a wholesome diet. Human

bodies

are a complex factory that requires a considerable variety of elements to function properly

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. Having meals with no fish or

meat

as a long-term lifestyle could have a risk of illness because our

bodies

were not decided in

this

way. In conclusion, I am convinced that there is substantial evidence to support that eating no animal product will definitely benefit the environment by reducing the chance of animal abuse.

However

, it may not be the best lifestyle

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everyone owing to the fact

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our

bodies

require a range of nutrition that normally can be found in

meat

and fish to remain healthy.