Most countries believe that international tourism has harmful effects. why do they think so? How to change their views?

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It is argued that international tourists are not beneficial for
environment
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as several nations ponder.
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essay will discuss reasons
such
as they not only create pollution but
also
involve in illegal
activities
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solutions including awareness
compaign
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campaign
campaigns
and stringent fine.
To begin
with, several tourists,who visit
to
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foreigner
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countries either for entertainment or work, pollution is created by them and they mess the natural beauty of forests and mountains. To explain
this
, since visitors
abondon
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abandon
numerous products on the
visting
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visiting
place
such
as polythene which is detrimental for atmosphere because it does not compose naturally.
For example
,
growing
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number of visitors visit Mount Everest ,and they
abondon
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abandon
large
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amount of plastic bottles and plastic bags .Due to
this
, a big dump of plastic bags and bottles have been established there .
As a result
, sometimes, wild animals eat
this
and passed away. To
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this
,
government
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the government
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should aware
tourist
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regarding pollution. owing to
this
,
this
problem can be tackled. Moving
further
, sometimes visitors commit
crime
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in
another countries
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another country
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as well as they smuggle things from one country to another because they get enough amount of money. To
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elaborate
celebrate
this
,
large
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number of tourism not only participate in offensive
activities
but
also
they encourage to
modern
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generation that they should take part .In
this
way,criminal
activities
are faced by them.
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,in
previous
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the previous
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time, more than half
quantells
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quantiles
gold had been smuggled in
Indonasia
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Indonesia
by visitor.
Therefore
,
tourist
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visa is not provided by many nations. To tackle
this
,
leagal
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legal
authority ought to give strict punishment to those who commit
offence
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the offence
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. In conclusion,
contaminated
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a contaminated
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environment and participating in offensive
activities
are contributory reasons that numerous countries do not allow tourism;
however
, higher administration must aware tourists and
penelaized
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penalized
them.
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