Some people say now there is less communication between family members than in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Humans are social creatures and effective communication help to build a healthy family and society.
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of
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between the parents and kids are getting weaker compared to the previous years. Everyone from the family should take initiative to increase the interaction and bring positive energy to the family. Comparing to the past decade world is running too swift and
people
have less
time
to spend in the house. Now a day’s individuals spend most of their
time
outside
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for office work, business or few other engagements. Due to
this
people
have less
time
to spend with family
members
.
For example
, there is a high possibility,
people
working in various shift may not meet their spouse and children for numerous days in a month. Currently, professionals give the highest priority for career growth and to achieve
this
they are sending more
time
in their employment premises. Due to
this
sacrifice, they may be able to achieve better employment benefits,
however
, they are losing the quality
time
they supposed to spend with their loving ones. Another factor affecting family bond is the newer friends circle created by each individual and they would like to spend more
time
with them rather than close relatives.
People
would like to spend more
time
with virtual friends from social media applications like Facebook, Instagram, etc. Recent researches show a major percentage of youngsters and adults spend many hours on the
internet
. In
past
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internet
was
luxury
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a luxury
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and
people
try to avoid
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the internet
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during their leisure times. New technologies and mobile phones overcome all these imitations and today
internet
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the internet
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changed from luxury to necessity. Now all the social media applications, instant messengers, games, etc. are available on
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mobile and
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are spending valuable
time
on it. In additions to the above point’s other factors like stress, employment requirements, peoples demands,
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gap between family
members
, mistrust, etc.
also
playing a crucial role in narrowing the gap between family
members
. Based on the factors furnished above I strongly believe
communication
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gap between the family
members
are increasing compared to the past decade and
this
behavior
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is not healthy at all. For a bright future
people
should take initiative to spend more
time
with family
members
and
additionally
employers and authorities enforce laws to reduce extra
time
spending on
internet
and office.
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