Computers today can quickly and accurately translate languages, therefore, it is a waste of time to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, there are many computer programs that can quickly and accurately translate languages.
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, it is unnecessary to learn a foreign
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. It can be clearly seen that
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efficient
translation
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programs are now available in various gadgets and works through the internet which means that
people
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can access it everywhere they go.
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,
language
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is complex and I believed that
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quality communication needs the
linguished
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languished
linguistic
skill. Nowadays, the
translation
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programs are used by
people
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around the world and
it
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is
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available in various languages which are convenient for
people
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who want to translate the foreign languages; it can translate the word, sentences or articles for your work or study papers.
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,
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computers cannot replace the conversation in our life.
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, Asian
people
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who live in
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a western
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country cannot communicate with western
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by using the
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program all the time. Human instinct is designed for the
people
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to
people
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communication
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by the program speaker.
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, it is important for
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to learn
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foreign
language
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. Particularly in
people
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who live in
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foreign country.
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, the immigrants who work in America should be able to communicate
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their colleagues.
Moreover
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,
language
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is the basic skill for
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a human
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to communicate with others, it
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time to
learning
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and understanding because it might be complex at the
first
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stage but it worth for the effective communication. In conclusion, I completely disagree that it is waste of time to learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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. I think that
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computer
translation
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is
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in
temporary
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the temporary
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situation but not for
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long term conversation.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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