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Some people claim that museums and art galleries will not bee need because people can see historical objects and works of arts by computers. Do you agree or disagree

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Internet
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 has been in the modern years the main source of
informations
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expecially
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especially
 among the younger generations. Many students
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in particular
 believe that online resources could eventually replace
museums
 and
art
 galleries.
This
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am completely disagree
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completely disagree
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 with
this
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 statements and the reason why everyone should visit
museums
 rather than downloading poor quality images.
First
 of all, I believe that there must be a reason why
museums
 have always been well looked after by the governments and community that host them. In my opinion, entering
in
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a
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art
 gallery or a museum is a
life changing
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 experience and a place where you can enjoy the beauty and the quality of that specific piece of
art
. It is indeed an
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 that can not
be describe
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while downloading an image from the computer it is a much basic,
low quality
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 feeling that can not be compared.
Also
, the images that you purchase online could not be the original
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 and you could never be sure of the authenticity of
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.
Secondly
, when you
pourchase
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purchase
 a ticket for a museum often a tour operator is included.
In other
words
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 you have the advantage of listening to a
high
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 educated expert that
explain
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 the history and the background of the piece of
art
 you are looking at with the possibility of asking questions if needed.
A recent
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 research conducted by
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Oxford university stated that attending a museum is the best way to learn about historical monuments and it is considered to
longer- lasting
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 in your memory during the years. To summarise I strongly believe that the internet and computer will never have the ability to replace
art
 galleries or
museums
 because of the feelings and emotions that involved in it, and if I were a teacher at school I would encourage my students to visit historical object in person.
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