Some people claim that museums and art galleries will not bee need because people can see historical objects and works of arts by computers. Do you agree or disagree

Internet

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has been in the modern years the main source of

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expecially

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especially

among the younger generations. Many students

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in particular

believe that online resources could eventually replace

museums

and

art

galleries.

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essay will discuss the reason why

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am completely disagree

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completely disagree

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with

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statements and the reason why everyone should visit

museums

rather than downloading poor quality images.

First

of all, I believe that there must be a reason why

museums

have always been well looked after by the governments and community that host them. In my opinion, entering

in

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a

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art

gallery or a museum is a

life changing

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experience and a place where you can enjoy the beauty and the quality of that specific piece of

art

. It is indeed an

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that can not

be describe

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while downloading an image from the computer it is a much basic,

low quality

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feeling that can not be compared.

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, the images that you purchase online could not be the original

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and you could never be sure of the authenticity of

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.

Secondly

, when you

pourchase

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purchase

a ticket for a museum often a tour operator is included.

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words

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you have the advantage of listening to a

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educated expert that

explain

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the history and the background of the piece of

art

you are looking at with the possibility of asking questions if needed.

A recent

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research conducted by

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Oxford university stated that attending a museum is the best way to learn about historical monuments and it is considered to

longer- lasting

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in your memory during the years. To summarise I strongly believe that the internet and computer will never have the ability to replace

art

galleries or

museums

because of the feelings and emotions that involved in it, and if I were a teacher at school I would encourage my students to visit historical object in person.