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Computers today can quickly and accurately translate languages; therefore, it is a waste of time to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The use of technology has evolved markedly due to the
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 of
computers
. Nowadays, some opine that
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 it is completely useless to learn a non-native
language
 as modern
computers
 are capable of doing it for us. I partially agree with the above opinion and
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To begin
 with, if a person can handle a foreign
language
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 support of any device, it is inarguable that it will boost
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confidence and highlight
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personality.
Moreover
, it will be handy in an instance where you may not be able to seek the support of the
translation
 apps as it needs the connectivity of the internet.
For example
, it is notable that many vendors in Thailand are capable of handling two or more foreign languages and it has aided them to communicate with foreign customers more effectively to increase their sales.
However
, it can not be denied the fact that it is extremely difficult to learn a new dialect as it is a long-term process where a considerable amount of time may have to be capitalized on it. Many
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 who seek the support of these new
translation
 apps are either students or top businessmen around the globe.
Therefore
, the
translation
 assistance they receive is vital to conduct their day to day activities without any
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hassle
. To illustrate, Many Sri Lankan companies use
translation
 methods in
computers
 to convert their messages to
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language
 as the Chinese hardly understand English
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 it has allowed those companies to save
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 of hiring a translator.
Although
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 learning a new
language
 is a hard procedure, it increases our ability to communicate with each other more effectively. With that being said, we cannot deny the multifold advantages of
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computers
 as it has made our lives easier.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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