It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

There is no doubt that
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early age is the appropriate time for a single child to learn
distinguish
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between right and wrong. I do not think that
punishment
is important to teach
children
this
distinction.
However
,
parents
and teachers are allowed
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minor
punishment
to educate good behaviour to
children
. Traditionally, some people think that
punishment
may help their child to teach the difference between good or bad things.
Therefore
,
parents
sometimes scold their wellsprings during learning time or sometimes they might be beaten
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children
.
As a result
, the
children
may not get proper realisation about good or bad behaviour rather than become more aggressive and ride.
Psychologist
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A psychologist
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suggests that beating may have an effect on child’s brain which cause
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mental problem.
For example
,
punishment
may
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convulsive brain disorder to the
children
, resulting in disable to understand
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message which
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from their family and society. So, I strongly disagree that
punishment
is necessary to help
children
to learn well-manner.
On the other hand
,
Children
do not focus on their right track, unless their
parents
force them. For the purpose of proper guidance of the
children
, family and school are allowed some minor penalty
such
as doing household work, cut-off child’s pocket money, doing extra math exercise which
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a child more active and
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realisation
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a realisation
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of good-task. Some scientists say that
such
kind of penalty may have an impact on
children
’s mind to avoid doing something worse rather than scolding. For these reasons,
parents
and teachers should aware of choosing
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way to teach their
children
that does not harmful for
children
. In conclusion, at
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early age,
children
are able to learn the good things or behaviour with love and affection other than
punishment
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • punishment
  • positive reinforcement
  • consequences
  • time-outs
  • removal of privileges
  • open communication
  • clear expectations
  • consistency
  • fairness
  • disciplinary action
  • proportionate
  • moral values
  • internalization
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