Logging of the rain forests is serious problem and it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. Do you agree or disagree?

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cutting down the trees has a vital effect on rain forest resulting
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outcomes in human and animal life.
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, it will emphasize
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the fact that the people will have
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amounts of trees left to breathe and gradually animals may vanish from the planet.
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with, plants play a very significant role in living beings either in terms of supplying oxygen or protecting them from harmful gases.
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of preserving rain forest for human needs is gradually slowing down in
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generation. Which is resulting in deforestation.
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, countries like Nepal who is surprisingly rich in natural resources has been struggling to protect its rain forest from human theft. As a consequence, there
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been so many landslide cases in
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part of it.
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future that people will suffer from breathing problem due to
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of plants.
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, flora and fauna are considered as a two different part of
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which is inseparable from each other.
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demand
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modified furniture and advanced wooden interior in the building is leading
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world towards horrific problems putting
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impact on them.
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, it is showed by the research that numerous wildlife is vanished because of deforestation.
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, it is crucial that how negatively
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human advancement is affecting on
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wealth of planet Earth. In conclusion, it is undeniable that how badly
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world is suffering from
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desertification. Each tiny creature is in great danger due to it. If we human do not stop influencing in fancy crafted wooden interior
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it is impossible to save
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planet from collapsing.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • carbon sink
  • global warming
  • indigenous tribes
  • livelihood
  • displacement
  • cultural erosion
  • soil erosion
  • water cycle
  • humidity levels
  • rainfall patterns
  • droughts
  • ecosystem services
  • pollination
  • climate change
  • logging
  • rain forests
  • habitats
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