Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Some are on the view that extra effort and concern is diverted to save wild animals and birds. I totally disagree
to
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the above fact that extra effort is been put rather less investment and action is been taken by people at present. Deforestation is happening at an alarming rate
world wide
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impacting the lifecycle of
wild
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wildlife
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life
.
To begin
with, natural habitat and the breeding grounds of species are getting
decereased
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decreased
by selfless acts by corporates for housing and
constrction
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construction
. For
an
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example, the
world
saw the
last
white African Rhino
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loosing
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losing
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its
life
due to
loss
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of natural space for it to live in.
In addition
to
this
,
Amazon
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the Amazon
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forest which is considered to be the largest rain forest in the
world
lost 10 % of its trees in the
last
2 years which has caused many endangered species to vanish from
this
planet.
On the other hand
poaching and
hunting
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animals have been on the rise over
the
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recent years.
Firstly
, some countries,
such
as Japan have given government sponsorship to conduct mass killings of whales as a sport .
Furthermore
,
paching
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patching
poaching
packing
which is considered to be one of the
billion dollar
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businesses in the
world
has
pave
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the way without any restriction or action to kill animals to be sold at
open
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market.
Finally
, these kinds of actions without any restrictions will result in the extinction of
wild
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life
to the
world
very
qucikly
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quickly
In
conclusion
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it is clear that even if some people believe that extra effort and investment is been put
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save
wild
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wildlife
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life
and birds, the truth of the matter is that
its
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the quite opposite which is happening and urgent attention is needed to solve
this
complex issue.
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