Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Some are on the view that extra effort and concern is diverted to save wild animals and birds. I totally disagree
to
the above fact that extra effort is been put rather less investment and action is been taken by people at present.
Deforestation is happening at an alarming rate Change preposition
with
world wide
impacting the lifecycle of Correct your spelling
worldwide
wild
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wildlife
life
. To begin
with, natural habitat and the breeding grounds of species are getting decereased
by selfless acts by corporates for housing and Correct your spelling
decreased
constrction
. For Correct your spelling
construction
an
example, the Correct article usage
apply
world
saw the last
white African Rhino Replace the word
losing
loosing
its Correct your spelling
losing
life
due to loss
of natural space for it to live in. Correct article usage
the loss
In addition
to this
, Amazon
forest which is considered to be the largest rain forest in the Correct article usage
the Amazon
world
lost 10 % of its trees in the last
2 years which has caused many endangered species to vanish from this
planet.
On the other hand
poaching and hunting
animals have been on the rise over Add a comma
,hunting
the
recent years. Correct article usage
apply
Firstly
, some countries, such
as Japan have given government sponsorship to conduct mass killings of whales as a sport .Furthermore
, paching
which is considered to be one of the Correct your spelling
patching
poaching
packing
billion dollar
businesses in the Add a hyphen
billion-dollar
world
has pave
the way without any restriction or action to kill animals to be sold at Change the verb form
paved
open
market. Add an article
the open
an open
Finally
, these kinds of actions without any restrictions will result in the extinction of wild
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wildlife
life
to the world
very qucikly
In Correct your spelling
quickly
conclusion
it is clear that even if some people believe that extra effort and investment is been put Add a comma
,conclusion
to
save Change preposition
in to
wild
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wildlife
life
and birds, the truth of the matter is that its
the quite opposite which is happening and urgent attention is needed to solve Correct your spelling
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