It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought together.

Families are not as close as they used to be. At least in countries from the western
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this
is a sad reality
that is
shared by all social classes, from E to A. The close unit that helped to shape our society through thousands of years is steadily
disapearing
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disappearing
, bringing together significant
psicological
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psychological
, educational and
economical
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impacts. Why
such
a trend is
occuring
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occurring
? There is not a single or a simple answers for that. In reality, there
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a multitude of drivers with different weights according to the social extract which by it was affected.
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we can pinpoint the industrial revolution as the common historical element and as the igniting force behind all of them. With the advent of the Industrial Revolution, strong economical forces were unleashed, creating social chaos, disintegration and progress.
Humain
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Human
beings were reduced to the role of instruments for profits. Men, women and children were not spared. Long and exhausting journeys replaced hours of family quality time together. Even those with more economic resources were
also
affected. Money, leisure and hedonism had a tremendous moral impact. Selfishness and the
agressive
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aggressive
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for pleasure and adventure ruined many marriages. Not
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surprisingly
the
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of material resources
also
created terrible feuds between relatives fighting for their share in the inheritance. The consequences of
this
situation are clear. Depression, social instability and
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lack of
colaboration
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collaboration
.
Although
the state of
desintegration
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disintegration
is advanced, it is possible to recover part of the magic of living in families. Of
course
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families now should be seen in a
differect
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different
perspective,
incorpoarting
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incorporating
the evolution of society
inclusivesness
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inclusiveness
.
Technology
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could
also
support
this
endeavour by providing tools that make
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for people to keep connected despite
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the long
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distance. There is not a single solution. To reestablish the benefits of living in
family
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a family
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will demand a change in attitude, but the profits for both individual and societies are clear: the
restablishment
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establishment
reestablishment
of a state of belonging, sharing and
colaboration
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collaboration
. No doubt that
this
is a
valuos
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values
value
reward!
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