Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.Do you agree or disagree?

music

is one of the popular past time of

people

nowadays.

however

, some argue that it can positively connect

people

of various ages and cultures as well. in my opinion,

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strongly agree

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statement and

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will discuss

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topic in

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essay.

music

is eternal. once it is introduced to the public, its existence

remain

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throughout the ages.

that is

why even the young

generation

these days are fond of listening to old

songs

. they might be living in a different

generation

, but they can still feel the

music

of the past with the help of

internet

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and social media.

moreover

, old

people

and youngsters use

music

to strengthen their bonds.

for instance

, grandmother singing her

favorite

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song

for her

granchildren

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grandchildren

makes them feel more connected to her.

in addition

,

music

represents our culture to the young

generation

through its lyrics and

rhytm

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rhythm

. old

songs

sometimes use words that

describes

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their time.

for instance

, the famous

filipino

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song

"

bahay

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kubo

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" represents

the

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life in the province and the traditional set-up of houses in the past. listening

in

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this

kind of

song

,

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can help the young ones to connect to the elderly.

moreover

, a senior citizen listening to the latest

song

might assist him in understanding the happenings in the current

generation

. in my conclusion, it is true that

music

is one of the nicest

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to reconnect

people

of different ages and culture. it is made possible due to the presence of

internet

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the internet

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that helps in keeping the old

songs

kept on track.

thus

, making the bond of previous and present

generation

intact through the lyrics of the

songs

.