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Nowadays older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problem does this cause and what are the solutions?

Department stores must need to sell the
food
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 within their origin of the
country
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instead
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 of the
imports
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 from international
countries
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.  I will explain my opinion clearly in the below paragraphs and with a proper conclusion.
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, in my opinion, department stores need to sell foods on the origin of the
country
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 and international
countries
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 because in our
country
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 we do not have any proper
corn
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 crops.
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,
corn
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 was the best
food
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 to eat and to stay fit which was mainly preferred by athletics and
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corn
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 has fewer calories, which contains high proteins,
fibers
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fibres
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 to our body.
However
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,
corn
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 was very cheap to the point of cost any person in our
country
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 could easily afford it.
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, one of my friends and his name is Vinesh. He was very interested in the cricket game and
also
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 he was
also
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 a state-level player. One day I asked him about diet, he said he mainly eats
corn
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 because it has fewer calories and is high
protein
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in protein
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.
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, every
country
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 has to do exports and
imports
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 where they can easily get more money and apart from
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, they will get some friendship from those two
countries
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.
India
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 has very few resources for petroleum products. Where
India
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 tries to import from different
countries
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 and
also
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India
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 was the
second
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 population
country
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 in the world.
India
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 mainly
imports
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 petroleum from the
country
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Dubai
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. 
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,
Dubai
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 was a very poor
country
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. After the export of petroleum to many
countries
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,
Dubai
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 generated more income on export business and now
Dubai
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 was the fifth richest
country
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 in the world. To conclude, there is a lot of lack of
food
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 resources in the
country
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India
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 because of
this
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India
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 will import
food
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 from other
countries
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. By doing exports and
imports
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 the government will earn more money, and they can easily spend it.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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