Nowadays older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problem does this cause and what are the solutions?
Department stores must need to sell the
food
within their origin of the country
instead
of the imports
from international countries
. I will explain my opinion clearly in the below paragraphs and with a proper conclusion.
Firstly
, in my opinion, department stores need to sell foods on the origin of the country
and international countries
because in our country
we do not have any proper corn
crops. Moreover
, corn
was the best food
to eat and to stay fit which was mainly preferred by athletics and also
corn
has fewer calories, which contains high proteins, fibers
to our body. Change the spelling
fibres
However
, corn
was very cheap to the point of cost any person in our country
could easily afford it. For instance
, one of my friends and his name is Vinesh. He was very interested in the cricket game and also
he was also
a state-level player. One day I asked him about diet, he said he mainly eats corn
because it has fewer calories and is high protein
.
Change preposition
in protein
Secondly
, every country
has to do exports and imports
where they can easily get more money and apart from this
, they will get some friendship from those two countries
. India
has very few resources for petroleum products. Where India
tries to import from different countries
and also
India
was the second
population country
in the world. India
mainly imports
petroleum from the country
Dubai
. For instance
, Dubai
was a very poor country
. After the export of petroleum to many countries
, Dubai
generated more income on export business and now Dubai
was the fifth richest country
in the world.
To conclude, there is a lot of lack of food
resources in the country
India
because of this
India
will import food
from other countries
. By doing exports and imports
the government will earn more money, and they can easily spend it.Submitted by sivahunk32 on
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