In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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more and more
students
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choose to
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abroad compare to the past.
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as learning a new
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or having more courses available.
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with some disadvantages like an increase in
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and being far from your hometown. In
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and cons. Nowadays, many
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decide to
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in foreign countries, which will allow them to speak a new
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. In fact, living for 3 or more years in a new
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will
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them the opportunity to become bilingual, which is very important for many reasons.
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they will be more competitive when it comes to
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a job. In many interviews
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instance, the employers look at the number of
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spoken by the candidate and
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will lead to a higher probability of being employed.
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, depending on where they live,
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will be able to find the most suitable course or master in a different
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, many
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lives
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in cities where they can not find what they want to
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and for
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reason they choose to change
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the city
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.
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, they will be more motivated as they can learn what they really want.
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, moving
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is not always an easy choice as the University
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degrees
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need to rent a room or a flat for many years.
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, many
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won't be able to pay
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amount of money for their children.
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Universities could cost as much as 50 thousands dollar per year
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wich
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is more than the average salary earned by people in many developing countries. Another consequence of studying abroad is that
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will be far away from their
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and friends.
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, because of the high cost spent on tuitions and the rent, they won't be able to go back during the holidays.
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, they will easily feel powerless and lonely which can lead to depression and other mental illnesses. In conclusion, choose to
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in a
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foreign
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will surely give to the people the opportunity to learn a new
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but
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find the most
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appropriate
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they will be more chance to find a job.
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, because of the high cost needed
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will not be possible for everyone and it can
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cause mental problems to some of them as they will miss their
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. In the future, we should be able to reduce the costs of universities and give more opportunity to
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families
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that can not afford it.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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