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In many countries , people now wear Western clothes rather than traditional clothing .Why? Is this positive or negative

#countries #people #clothes
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argue that number of
people
 get dressed which based on
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instead
 of using traditional clothes
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these days in various places around the world.
Although
 some
people
 believe that there are clear disadvantages of
this
 phenomenon. I would confident to say that advantages are more significant. Regarding the enormous issue, the reason why select western clothes more than historical costume due to the fact that they are suitable for the modern period as well as activities of consumers will be
inconvence
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inconvenience
inconvenient
 if
people
 put on a traditional
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consume
costume
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 a daily basis. Take the example of, Ao dai which is a national dress in Vietnam.
Although
 it has a strong meaning to the history of Vietnam, the Vietnamese still do not use it frequently in daily life because it
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user
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 do not be comfortable .
However
, Ao Dai is dressed for a crucial occasion related to
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cultural events in Vietnam.
Moreover
, Suits or office uniform are appropriate for
users's
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 activities when they employ at
workplace
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the workplace
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.
Secondly
, Western garments have many choices of style based on
indiviual
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individual
 personality. They are able to choose
diferent
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different
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 combine with many of
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fabric
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 that they interested in.
In addition
, young
people
 can imitate the celebrities outfit throughout the number of
entainments
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entertainments
 activities
such
 as American film, the US-UK music which is displayed on Television to attract a great deal of attention by their outfit.
By contrast
, it will bring impacts if
people
 overuse modern clothes. It may result
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 loss of culture as
tradition
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 costume is one of special feature to
indentify
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identify
 among the nations in the world. Simultaneously, it is
also
 the pride of each country as well as the
neighbors
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 country can explore and enjoy
a beauty inhabitants
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beauty inhabitants
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 throughout traditional clothing.
At in
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 all, it seems to me that we gain more than we lose from
this
 movement because we have many
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option to decide the outfit suitable for our personality.
Therefore
, we become unique and
cofident
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confident
 with ourselves.
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