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An increasing number of professional such as doctor and teacher are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. what problem does this cause ? what can be done to deal with this situation ?

#doctor #teacher #countries #work #situation
In
this
 era of
cut throat
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 competition ,
number
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a number
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 of professional migrate from their native to another
country
.There
are
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number
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a number
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 of reason why they migrating but for
betterment
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the betterment
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 and
bright
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future
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 they go to the developed
country
 .In
this
 situation what can be done to deal with it and
government
 should take some serious steps against
this
. The
first
 and foremost reason to
support
 my ideology is that in
developing
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a developing
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country
 there are less job and less payscale due to
that
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 they work in
developed
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a developed
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country
 .The
government
 of their
country
 do not give ideal service and facilities.
Firstly
, they all are professional and they want to start their own
bussiness
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business
 but lack
of
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apply
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government
support
 and facility they do not start their own
bussiness
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business
.
In addition
, foreign
government
support
 in terms of money and loans. On the one hand, there are
many
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reason
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reasons
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 why people migrating to
developing
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a developing
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country
 .
Moreover
, professional demand is higher in foreign
countrty
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country
countries
 .
For example
 , as per Times of India newspaper in 2015, thirty thousand professional migrate to foreign for
better
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a better
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 future and work .Today, in
this
 era number becoming increase day by day.
On the other hand
 ,
government
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the government
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 should give
high
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a high
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 salary to doctor and teacher .Teacher are
backbone
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the backbone
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 of every
country
.
Government
 should provide
best
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the best
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 services and facilities to professional .They should
support
for
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apply
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their business and instrument for medical services. To conclude, doctor and
teacher
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,teacher
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 are ideal
professional
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professionals
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 of
country
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the country
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 .
Government
 make policies for them to work in
country
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the country
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 and it will lead to
growth
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the growth
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 of
country
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the country
a country
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.
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