Your family is going to move to another town. Write a letter to the Principal of a local school asking if they will accept your son. Describe his academic achievements and scope of interests.

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Kate. I am writing
this
letter regarding the possibility of accepting my
son
in
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your
school
.My family and I are planning to move to Toronto
this
summer. Now I am looking for a new
school
for my
son
. He is
13-year-old
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a 13-year-old
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gay and is graduating
at
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in
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7th class in
the
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apply
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school
#1575, which is famous as one of the best schools for learning
foreing
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foreign
languages in Moscow and was ranked as
seventh
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place among
lingvistic
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linguistic
Moscow schools. If we talk about
schedule
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, there are five native language classes per week and four English classes.
In addition
, it has varied activities for physical and intellectual development
school
children. As for my
son
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his average score is 4,86.
Moreover
, he is keen on running and took
second
place
at
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the city running competition
last
year. I would really appreciate it if you could сonsider enrolling my
son
in your
school
. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Kate Smith
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