Band 8 IELTS Essay Sample | News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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Pictorial representation in a
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along with the text in newspapers or tv media is becoming increasingly common. The main reason behind
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is the
arguement
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argument
that pictures are far more effective compared to words. I agree
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argument and will demonstrate the reasons to support
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. A picture speaks a thousand words, if we come across a picture in the newspaper it instantly grabs our attention and
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interest to read more about the
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develops. A graphic used in putting a
story
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across makes
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particular read more gripping.
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Moreover
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pictures
helps
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help
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in depicting the
story
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much quickly and effectively as it helps in establishing a
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with the article. If a
story
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is just
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and has no pictures or visuals associated
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, it is more likely to be missed by the reader.
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could result in
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of
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very important and useful pieces of news.
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text
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in a news
story
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can give you the detail about the events yet the retention power is increased if a video or
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image related to those events is shown. Even for
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the chances of remembering a topic can increase manyfold if taught or shown with the help of supporting graphics. As most
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teenagers
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the teenagers
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these days are not interested in reading long texts or news articles, visual representation helps in increasing awareness about certain topics like politics, current affairs especially in
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age group which is very important. After listing out all the points,
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strongly believe that images or graphics or any form of visual representation can be
extremenly
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extremely
useful in putting the point across or helping the person understand and connect with a certain piece of information.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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