In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays,
schools
are preparing
students
to have both practical
skills
and academic
knowledge
. Many
schools
provide more practical learning whereas some give more of general academic
education
.
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essay will discuss why some school (write:
schools
; use a plural noun after some provide more general academic
education
than practical
education
and put forward
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to prepare
students
for the
world
of
work
. The
education
system as a whole is focused more
towards
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theoretical
knowledge
than practical
knowledge
. The syllabus being too outdated gives no value to the
students
, as it is very dated and less effective.
For
example
, children studying old lessons makes them less aware of the recent news and developments. Many
students
lack corporate ethics, which hampers their ability to be more efficient.
For
example
, many
first
jobbers find it difficult to cope up with the new job, as they lack practical
skills
.
This
also
affects their productivity.
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mix of practical and theory should be taught by the
schools
so as to train the
students
to be more prepared for the
world
of
work
. As the curriculum and teaching strategies are very old and do not provide much help to the
students
,
focus
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should be on introducing more practical aspects of learning and teaching to equip
students
with
skills
required for the workplace.
Schools
should conduct workshops to train
students
for
work related
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problems and solutions.
For
example
,
class
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dedicated specifically to address
work related
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queries and problems will help
students
be more aware of and confident when they start their
first
job. Providing internship projects will boost the confidence of the student and
also
make them more ready for the corporate
world
.
For
example
, summer internships help the
students
to be more productive as well as be more employable. Practical learning will provide
students
the
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job
skills
they lack. Practice makes perfect; the more one practises the closer one will be towards perfection.
Hence
practical
knowledge
is very essential for being ready for the
world
of
work
beforehand.
This
essay discussed what
schools
can do to provide more practical
knowledge
to
students
for preparing them for the
world
of
work
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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