In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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to have both practical
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provide more practical learning whereas some give more of general academic
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than practical
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to prepare
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for the
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of
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. The
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system as a whole is focused more
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than practical
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. The syllabus being too outdated gives no value to the
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, as it is very dated and less effective.
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, children studying old lessons makes them less aware of the recent news and developments. Many
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lack corporate ethics, which hampers their ability to be more efficient.
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, many
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jobbers find it difficult to cope up with the new job, as they lack practical
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mix of practical and theory should be taught by the
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so as to train the
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to be more prepared for the
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of
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. As the curriculum and teaching strategies are very old and do not provide much help to the
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should be on introducing more practical aspects of learning and teaching to equip
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with
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required for the workplace.
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should conduct workshops to train
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problems and solutions.
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dedicated specifically to address
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queries and problems will help
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be more aware of and confident when they start their
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job. Providing internship projects will boost the confidence of the student and
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make them more ready for the corporate
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, summer internships help the
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to be more productive as well as be more employable. Practical learning will provide
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job
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they lack. Practice makes perfect; the more one practises the closer one will be towards perfection.
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practical
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is very essential for being ready for the
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of
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to
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for preparing them for the
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of
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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