WRITING TASK 2 ACADEMIC TOPIC: Meat production requires relatively more land than crop production. Some people think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s meat consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s meat consumption? What kind of problems might such measure cause?

WRITING TASK 2 ACADEMIC TOPIC:

Meat

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production

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requires relatively more land than crop

production

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. Some

people

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think that as land is becoming scarce, the world’s

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consumption should be reduced. What measures could be taken to reduce the world’s

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consumption? What kind of problems might

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measure cause? Agricultural use of land

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as poultry and cattle farming specifically for

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production

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dominated some of the world’s territories meant for crop

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. With limited areas to grow both, others suggest that eating

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should be lessened

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. While it might be difficult to make

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happen, some suggestions and issues arising from it are laid down below. It is vaguely known that farming companies heavily use antibiotics to produce their

livestocks

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livestock

to accelerate weight gain and control infection and

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,

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contributes to the growing public health crisis of antibiotic resistance. For

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reason, the government should impose a more publicised information of how these

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products are produced before it reaches the household.

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,

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packaging should include warning labels indicating the

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and chemical contents added into it. In

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way,

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will carefully decide whether buying these products are worthy of their health.

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imposing

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solution

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could lead to other concerns

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in material and handling costs.

Plant- based

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products are one of the

fastest growing

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food categories in some countries nowadays. It has shown equivalent support from

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all around the world whether they are vegetarian or

non- vegetarian

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. Regardless of their personal food preferences,

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move to create a safer and healthier food choice could be of great value to the health system.

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strong opposition from conventional farmers and

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producers lobbying for policies to restrict

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alternatives

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as banning the terminologies “burgers” or “sausage” for anything

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not of animal origin. In light of numerous

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evidences

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that reducing

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consumption is a win-win effect especially to the environment, why are governments reluctant to act? The government should not succumb to pressures from different sectors and

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take bold actions to set a clear trajectory on the diet choices of

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. After all, the benefits outweigh the risk, as

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the

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always say.