Despite environmental concerns raised by scientist, people are not changing their life style. Why is this case? What could be done to encourage to save the environment?

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hot topic of debate these days.
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alarming
people
regarding the degradation of
environment
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the environment

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but, they are not taking
this
issue seriously and does not bother about
this
.In
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essay, the reason behind
this
mindset and what could be done to save the
environment
will be discussed.
To begin
with,individuals have become habituated
of
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modern lifestyle as they are comfortable in it.
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conditioner,which is
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one of
the free radicals part
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of daily routine.
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, it is
difficult
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task to leave it.
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,
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thinks he is
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it and the single
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does not harm the
environment
and
this
misinterpretation has misled the
people
as a result
,
environment
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will be harmed in long run.
However
, several steps could be taken to raise
the
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environmental awareness among
people
.
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as, initiating
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environmental awareness
campaings
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campaigns
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. In these
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making
people
understand the importance of
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air and water.
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they could be encouraged to use public transport and bicycle to move around in the city.
Furthermore
,volunteering service should be started in individuals workplace
such
as cleaning their own area, cleaning the street,less usage of
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bottle so that our mother nature will not be devastated. In conclusion,
people
have become habituated
of
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this
mordern
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lifestyle and they can not leave it, so government should take some necessary steps to save the
environment
and can create awareness among
individuls
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importance of nature.
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