In some countries around the world men and women are having children later in life. What are reasons for this development? What are the effects on society and family life?

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Earlier days, people used to marry at an early
age
of their life's and was giving
birth
to
children
at a young
age
.
However
, In Few, countries the trend has changed men and
women
are giving more importance to their desires than giving life to babies.
This
essay will discuss the causes of
this
change and what are the impacts on society and family life. As I mentioned above, These days, the Young generation is much dependent to achieve their goals despite other things
such
as marriage,
children
.
For Instance
, I was born, when my father was 22 and my mother was 20, but nowadays people are not having a child till more than 30.
In addition
to
this
, those who are preferring late
birth
most of them are Average income family's, they believe that, if they have sufficient needs before
birth
then
they would be able to give whichever required for
children
.
therefore
, these are some reasons to think
children
at a late
age
. though, men and
women
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quiet
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comfortable at
primary
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level, eventually, they would see many impacts. as I have studied in different articles, when
women
age
increases the
conceiveness
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conceives
precentage
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percentage
as well decline,
Nevertheless
, I studied, 70 years old
women
was
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given
birth
to
infant
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an infant
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in some other articles. another reason is child might
born
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bear
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with low immunity or
handcap
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handicap
.so, they need to face so many problems from society if they born like that.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • developments
  • adulthood
  • education
  • career
  • financial stability
  • ready
  • start a family
  • assisted reproductive technologies
  • personal fulfillment
  • self-development
  • improved healthcare
  • life expectancies
  • cultural factors
  • religious factors
  • access
  • birth control methods
  • responsibilities
  • challenges
  • parenthood
  • influence
  • media
  • popular culture
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