It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is certainly true that during these days,
technology
is becoming more widespread in many parts of the developed world, however
, it might affect the traditional cultures
and change them from roots. In my point of view, I agree with this
somewhat, and I believe that the traditional cultures
have benefited and impacted from
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by
technology
.
On the one hand, technology
has accomplished several important benefits to preserve the cultural heritage. One of the main reasons can be that smart appliances like televisions and mobile phones display different civilizations of various countries, which means that people from foreign cultures
can learn a wide range of information about this
culture. Furthermore
, technology
can reveal many secrets about old traditions for the young generation. As a result
, young people can educated
and become proud of their countries. Change the verb form
be educated
For instance
, several channels and programs about history
and Add an article
the history
geopraphy
show the historical stories about pharaohs and the pyramids in Egypt.
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geography
On the other hand
, it is also
possible to make the opposing case that in fact, there are multiple negative influences on the country's culture because of technology
. One of the major reasons can be that technological devices are now accessiable
to everyone especially adults. Correct your spelling
accessible
This
means that they have the ability to follow and copy popular celebrities actions, habits, and behaviour, which might lead to the death of the country's culture and traditions. A particularly good example here is that in some Arab countries, people are obsessed with famous celebrities and act like them and dressed like them.
In conclusion, while technology
is becoming common nowadays, I believe that tradition
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traditional
cultures
will be lost because of the development technology
and it will be preserved because of Change preposition
of technology
technology
at the same time.Submitted by Mariam on
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