SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT IT IS BEST TO ACCEPT A BAD SITUATION SUCH AS AN UNSATISFACTORY JOB OR SHORTAGE OF MONEY. OTHERS ARGUE THAT IT IS BETTER TO TRY AND IMPROVE SUCH SITUATIONS. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

Life is full of surprises and those amazements come with good and bad phases. The majority believes that accepting the
situation
is best at that particular
time
whereas others have
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thinking that it is better to deal with good and fight with bad ones. The following paragraphs will elucidate the propitious aspect of the aforementioned text and
thus
will lead to a plausible conclusion. To commence with, it takes a lot of courage to accept the
situation
of the negative aspect and many people
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with
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immensely. It is a belief that
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major role and with
time
these phases will change. People
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to make them satisfy in that period of
time
such
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person
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job but he deals with that part and shows that he is satisfied and it is just a bad phase of life which will pass by the
time
. To elaborate
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credible sources have revealed that 47.2% of the population likes to accept and respect the
situation
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good stead as far as boosting the morale is concerned. Paradoxically, on the other side of the fence much
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of the population like to deal with the
situation
. People
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that
time
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in
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play. A
person
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of money and is now not capable to deal with the expenses and is not able to pay his bills will not wait for the
time
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jobs and earn
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of dollars and deal with the
situation
.
Hence
, sometimes it is better to get in the action rather than accepting the
situation
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thoughts and deliberations with myself, I
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conclude that it is
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of
situation
at that particular
time
and it
also
depends on the
person
to
person
whether to fight or accept the condition. In my opinion, one should look into the
situation
first
and act
accordingly
.
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  • settle
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