Companies spend millions each year on advertising online,in magazines and on billboards. These adverts can encourage people to buy goods that they do not really need. What are the positive and negative affects of consumerism?

Nowadays,advertisement has increasingly become popular.

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amount of money is spent annually by organizations on adverts that

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those online,newspaper and billboards. Resulting in

individuals

purchasing products

that

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of little necessity to them.

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essay will discuss the benefit as well as the drawback

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on end buyers. The major merit of buying products displayed on the internet or in

newspaper

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the newspaper

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is having fashion wears for different occasions.

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is because a lot of

individuals

have a planned schedule of various events for each day of the week.

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, a friend of mine

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in the bank

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wardrobe full of various types of clothes.

As a result

of these,the companies

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them allowance monthly for looking good and

also

they have a policy that every employee must look smart and corporate within the office environment. It is

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no doubt, that there

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been an influx of customers on a daily basis because of the high standard of the company.

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,

individuals

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to be informed and educated about how certain drugs would be essential for their body.

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, as a

nutritionist

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some medications would improve the immune system of the

individuals

and there would be a reduced rate of them falling ill due to the daily intake of these vitamins

However

,spending way above budget is demerit and

this

causes

individuals

to have little or no savings for emergency situations.

In addition

,items displayed on some website online are different from what is delivered to customers and

therefore

creates a bad image for

such

establishments.Due to

this

,

individuals

would prefer to visit a physical store that they would walk into and pick up whatever they want to buy. In conclusion,

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the consequences of buying goods advertised for consumers

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receiving substandard items whereas being educated on the usefulness of some drugs is of great benefit to the health

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individuals

.