In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What do you think is the reason for this, and is it a good thing or a bad thing?

Nowadays we can notice that architectures in cities throughout the world more typical than
the
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past when constructions revealed specific characters of nationalities. There are several
reasons
for
this
and whereas
this
trend is becoming popular, I prone to think that it has more negative effects for various
reasons
. One of the main
reasons
for the tendency is
an
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ecological safety. In many
cities
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there are
a
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plenty of standard constructions made by eco-materials which allow
to avoid
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pollutions.
For instance
, in many European countries
such
as Norway and
Sweetland
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several environmental projects implying smart buildings without plastic are realized. Another reason is
low
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cost of standard buildings. Builders are interested to save their and clients’ money and construct an economical building in
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unit housing scheme. Especially given the fact that the high land price, architects more and more apply a typical
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instead
of varieties. In spite of the positive effects mentioned above, I tend to think that unique projects in architecture should
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realized for couple
reasons
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.
Firstly
, every city should build up constructions within a specific traditional role due to as minimum to save culture properties. In turn, it helps to attract many tourists who ready to leave the money in that country.
Secondly
, we should not forget the fact that the unique architectures
as
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many natural places might be
source
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of inspiration for many people in art and
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architects as well. To conclude, today the tendency of the standard construction based on probable cause continues
increase
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. In my opinion, if modern unique buildings continue to give way to typical architectures,
this
might lead to negative effects in tourism and art development.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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