The pie charts below show the coffee production, coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world
The three pie charts depict the data about the three sectors of coffee around the globe. It is evident that Europe is a major nation that contributes to using coffee, South Africa
in
manufacturing it, and Correct your spelling
is
profit
expenditure
are higher through the delivery service.
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expenditures
To begin
with consumption, Europe is a major with 41%, While
America is on
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with nearly somewhat less than half. Japan comprises 12 per cent whereas
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of the world uses only 8 per cent.
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the rest
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considering manufacturing, South Africa is on top, making coffee in a proportion to 44. On the other hand
, the other three countries are almost similar ratio
: Indonesia (22%), Japan (18%) and Vietnam (16%).
The Fix the agreement mistake
ratios
last
pie chart of profit
distribution indicates about
different sectors of distribution in which, delivery service gain more than a half, retails slightly a quarter and Exporters Change preposition
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to
fifteen per cent. Change preposition
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Lastly
, with less profit
, producers only have a tenth of profit
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the profit
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