You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Neighbours,
First
of all,
i
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I

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want to clarify the reasons for the noise that you heard yesterday, indeed it was the birthday of my son Ismail,
i
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I

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have
invinted
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invented
invited

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some of his friends and some family members, in
fact
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,fact

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i
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I

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did not expect that numbers of guests. In
this
letter
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i want to express my sincere apologies to all of you, for the
disturb
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disturbance

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and the
inconvinience
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inconvenience

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caused, even though some of you were present with their children and did some noise as well,
its
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it's
it is

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not a reason to make
lot
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a lot

The noun phrase lot seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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of noise in the
appartment
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apartment

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.
Finally
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,Finally

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in the
future
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,future

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i
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I

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will inform you by a letter,
i
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will give it to each of you to inform you if there is an event that
i
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will
received
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receive

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to
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at

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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my house and
i
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will make
sur
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sure

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that the number of the guest is not too much to not repeat
such
a
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an

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inconvinience
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inconvenience

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. Best Regards Ismail
Limati
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Limit

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Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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