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Over the last few decade the media has promoted the image of young thin women as being ideal. What problems has this caused? What solutions can you suggest to this issue?

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It is inevitable that our appearance can be perceived as good or bad by people.In recent times,
women
 who are not on the fat are often showcased as perfect.
This
 essay will discuss the issues and how to tackle them. The possible major problem is the way plus
size
women
 are being bullied.
Firstly
,fat
women
 face numerous harassment from the young and the old.
For instance
, a big
size
 lady in the
university
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 of Ibadan in Nigeria was sexually harassed by her colleague after lectures on a weekday.
As a result
,she lost her self-confidence and withdrawal completely
out of
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the
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school.
Furthermore
,
lately
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 there
have
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been an increased surge of
women
 who have committed suicide.Because,most chubby
women
 are not expressive,so they prefer not to speak up when faced with
such
situation
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.
In addition
,some plus
size
 females have resulted to go for enhancement surgery and
this
 has led to their death. Regarding the possible solution is probably a consultation with a mental health therapist. They would be free to talk about their challenges.
Also
 having supportive and enlightened family and friends go a long way in aborting any suicidal thoughts.
For instance
,a friend of mine was advised by her friend to visit the therapist physician after having a session with her she felt much better about herself. In conclusion,
although
 the major issues that arise from
women
 being on the big
size
 are reduced
self esteem
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 and they
ending
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 their life.
Therefore
,being with the right set of people that would inspire and encourage them would be of great benefit.
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