Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support Your opinion.

University is an educational
institue
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institute

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, which plays an important role in the academic as well as extra-
curriculm
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curriculum
curricular

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activities
of the
students
. It helps the
students
to learn about new things and
also
secure their career by providing good sources. Let us discuss the reasons equal funding should be provided by universities for both library and
sports
activities
.
First
of all, not every student is a scholar. Some
students
prefer to participate in
sports
because of their interest.
Secondally
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Secondly
Secondarily

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, the long duration of
lecture
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the lecture
a lecture

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would make
students
tired.
Sports
activities
helps
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help

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to make them relax. So, universities should add more
sports
activities
to keep their
students
fit and healthy.
In addition
to it, universities always
maintains
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maintain

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their ranking at national and international level. By spending money in
sports
activit
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activities

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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