Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support Your opinion.

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University is an educational

institue

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institute

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, which plays an important role in the academic as well as extra-

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curriculum

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activities

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of the

students

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. It helps the

students

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to learn about new things and

also

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secure their career by providing good sources. Let us discuss the reasons equal funding should be provided by universities for both library and

sports

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activities

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of all, not every student is a scholar. Some

students

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prefer to participate in

sports

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because of their interest.

Secondally

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Secondly

Secondarily

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, the long duration of

lecture

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the lecture

a lecture

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would make

students

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tired.

Sports

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activities

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helps

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help

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to make them relax. So, universities should add more

sports

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activities

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to keep their

students

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fit and healthy.

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to it, universities always

maintains

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maintain

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their ranking at national and international level. By spending money in

sports

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activit

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activities

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

128 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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