Advances in science and technology have made great changes to the lives of ordinary people, but artists such as musicians, painters and writers are still highly valued. What can the arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

Various technological and scientific developments have tremendously enhanced our lifestyle and the way
this
is expanding, we are expected to have a far better lifestyle in the future than the current era. We have already ushered in a new era of previously unknown and unimaginable feats of technological development and the thanks go to the scientific discovery and invention alone. Despite
this
,
arts
, culture and traditions still have so much to teach us and
this
is why we still value
arts
and artists.  One thing
arts
teach us where
science
is silent is the appreciation of
life
. In
science
, there
are
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little value
of
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beauty
if something does not work.
Thus
a piece of abstract art has no meaning in
science
but has great stories to tell when we consider it an art. In the world of
arts
,
beauty
matter in and of themselves whereas in
science
, the only true measure is whether it works or not.
Arts
offer us a spiritual outlook of
life
while
science
teaches us just the opposite. We are surrounded by nature which is a rare combination
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science
and
arts
. If we leave out the
arts
and
beauty
from nature, it would become a dull theory of how molecules work together. To give an example, if we listen to the music of Mozart, we can learn about harmony and joy through the medium of music or if we read classical novels, the past world reveals itself to us.
Moreover
, when we look back at the stars
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a dark night, we appreciate the
beauty
and
arts
have taught us to appreciate
this
beauty
.   The great artists tell us about the true joys of
life
.
Thus
a classic book can teach us more about
life
than a biology book can. We do not need to understand
arts
to appreciate music, books or art exhibition but we need to understand scientific theories to understand how something really works. The artists reflect
life
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and teach us to learn about our inner-value. When we start appreciating
arts
, we start living
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life
to its fullest and live for others.  So to say,
science
and technology have made our physical world more comfortable in
this
century and will keep bringing new wonders in our daily
life
,
arts
and humanities have taught us to appreciate
life
, to live for a reason.

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