Advances in science and technology have made great changes to the lives of ordinary people, but artists such as musicians, painters and writers are still highly valued. What can the arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

Various technological and scientific developments have tremendously enhanced our lifestyle and the way

this

is expanding, we are expected to have a far better lifestyle in the future than the current era. We have already ushered in a new era of previously unknown and unimaginable feats of technological development and the thanks go to the scientific discovery and invention alone. Despite

this

,

arts

, culture and traditions still have so much to teach us and

this

is why we still value

arts

and artists.  One thing

arts

teach us where

science

is silent is the appreciation of

life

. In

science

, there

are

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little value

of

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beauty

if something does not work.

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a piece of abstract art has no meaning in

science

but has great stories to tell when we consider it an art. In the world of

arts

,

beauty

matter in and of themselves whereas in

science

, the only true measure is whether it works or not.

Arts

offer us a spiritual outlook of

life

while

science

teaches us just the opposite. We are surrounded by nature which is a rare combination

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science

and

arts

. If we leave out the

arts

and

beauty

from nature, it would become a dull theory of how molecules work together. To give an example, if we listen to the music of Mozart, we can learn about harmony and joy through the medium of music or if we read classical novels, the past world reveals itself to us.

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, when we look back at the stars

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a dark night, we appreciate the

beauty

and

arts

have taught us to appreciate

this

beauty

.   The great artists tell us about the true joys of

life

.

Thus

a classic book can teach us more about

life

than a biology book can. We do not need to understand

arts

to appreciate music, books or art exhibition but we need to understand scientific theories to understand how something really works. The artists reflect

life

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and teach us to learn about our inner-value. When we start appreciating

arts

, we start living

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life

to its fullest and live for others.  So to say,

science

and technology have made our physical world more comfortable in

this

century and will keep bringing new wonders in our daily

life

,

arts

and humanities have taught us to appreciate

life

, to live for a reason.