Advances in science and technology have made great changes to the lives of ordinary people, but artists such as musicians, painters and writers are still highly valued. What can the arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

Various technological and scientific developments have tremendously enhanced our lifestyle and the way
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is expanding, we are expected to have a far better lifestyle in the future than the current era. We have already ushered in a new era of previously unknown and unimaginable feats of technological development and the thanks go to the scientific discovery and invention alone. Despite
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, culture and traditions still have so much to teach us and
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is why we still value
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and artists.  One thing
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teach us where
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is silent is the appreciation of
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. In
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little value
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if something does not work.
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a piece of abstract art has no meaning in
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but has great stories to tell when we consider it an art. In the world of
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matter in and of themselves whereas in
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, the only true measure is whether it works or not.
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offer us a spiritual outlook of
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while
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teaches us just the opposite. We are surrounded by nature which is a rare combination
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and
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. If we leave out the
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from nature, it would become a dull theory of how molecules work together. To give an example, if we listen to the music of Mozart, we can learn about harmony and joy through the medium of music or if we read classical novels, the past world reveals itself to us.
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, when we look back at the stars
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a dark night, we appreciate the
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and
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have taught us to appreciate
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.   The great artists tell us about the true joys of
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a classic book can teach us more about
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than a biology book can. We do not need to understand
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to appreciate music, books or art exhibition but we need to understand scientific theories to understand how something really works. The artists reflect
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and teach us to learn about our inner-value. When we start appreciating
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, we start living
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to its fullest and live for others.  So to say,
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and technology have made our physical world more comfortable in
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century and will keep bringing new wonders in our daily
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,
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and humanities have taught us to appreciate
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, to live for a reason.

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