Online shopping is replacing offline or shopping from stores.Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Purchasing
things
via
internet
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the internet
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is removing do personally shopping from stores. It
is
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seems
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seem
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seen
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to be, merits and demerits for individuals which I will substantiate in my upcoming paragraphs with appropriate examples. To commence with, shopping
by
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online provides a plethora of benefits.
Firstly
, if
people
so busy
in
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their work and study
then
they can easily buy their necessary
things
with the help of internet from sitting their home or office.
For instance
, I purchase my clothes and other accessories through shopping applications namely amazon, snapdeal and fungzee.
Secondly
, various types of apps on mobile get opportunities to see lots of
latest
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the latest
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collections
on
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at
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a similar time. Especially,
new
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the new
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generation more
fascination
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about
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with
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online shopping owing to follow
latest
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the latest
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trendy clothes ,gadgets and accessories
such
as jeans, tops, watches, laptops, tabs and mobiles.From my point of view, buying
things
by
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online gives a wide range of options to buy different types of
things
in
easy
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an easy
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way.
On the contrary
, at the same
time
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online shopping put some negative impacts on
people
's shopping habits.I realize purchasing
things
online
it
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apply
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does not come with good qualities of products or materials even it does not durable
such
as my one of
friends
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my friends
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bought a watch
via
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online but after some days it started to create
problem
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a problem
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and stopped working.
Hence
, sometimes do shop by online become
the
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reason waste of money.
However
,
shopping
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by shopping
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by shops and stores,
people
can personally check the quality and originality of the product and get
statisfications
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satisfactions
. I feel go to stores and buy
things
like tiresome but
people
can receive good service with good
stuffs
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stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
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. To summarize, online shopping gives benefits as well as a number of demerits because of completely depends on online facilities not prove beneficial but it makes
easy
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it easy
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to do shopping during busy days. Alternatively, some
of
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people
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the people
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still prefer to visit
shop
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the shop
a shop
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for
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to
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buy their
things
which address as proper shopping.
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