The movements of people from the villages to the cities for work has caused a lots of problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?
People
are moving from the villages
to the cities
, some people
opine that this
movement cause
a number of problems. Change the verb form
causes
Rise
in rental rates in the big Correct article usage
The rise
cities
is the major problem due to this
. The solution to this
is better employment opportunities in the villages
so that people
do not need to move from the villages
.
On one side, the problem caused due to this
movement is the rapidly increasing rent of residential properties
in the cities
. Prices are decided on the basis of the demand
of
the Change preposition
for
properties
. More the demand
more will be the prices. If population
shift to the Correct article usage
the population
cities
, the demand
of
residential apartments and homes will Change preposition
for
increase
. This
increase
in demand
will lead to increase
in the rent of Correct article usage
an increase
properties
in the cities
. For instance
, rent
of the apartments in Delhi is increasing because Correct article usage
the rent
people
from the nearby villages
are shifting to Delhi.
On the other side, the solution to this
problem is better employment opportunities in the villages
. People
migrate to cities
in search of work because employment
Change preposition
of employment
opportunitues
there are a few. If companies and industries are open there, Correct your spelling
opportunities
people
will not move to the cities
. They will get the job there, no movement will lead to no increase
in demand
of
residential Change preposition
for
properties
. No increase
in demand
will eventually lead to economical
rental rates. Replace the word
economic
For example
, people
from small town
Gaziabad move to Delhi for jobs. If these are provided in their native place, they will not migrate.
In conclusion, Add a hyphen
small-town
major
issue caused by Add an article
the major
a major
such
migration is increased rental rates in the cities
. The best way to curbed
Change the form of the verb
curb
this
issue is providing
better job opportunities in the Change preposition
by providing
villages
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite