A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear James, We haven’t had a meeting since we graduated from high school. I am really delighted to arrange a meeting if you have a spare time. I received your email about
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happy to share some tips with you Let me begin with, Cỏ Hồng hill is the best choice to set a plan for camping in Dalat. It is a tranquil place surrounded by natural spectacles as well as good-hearted and supportive inhabitants living here. The
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the weather is really wonderful with a blue sky to avoid the polluted environment from
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of the metropolis.
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many thrilling activities
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,You do not forget to bring your camera to capture beautiful natural scenery.
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bring your jacket , gloves and scarf.
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fact that the temperatures can get as low as 10 degrees at night
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exciting vacation with your buddies. Honestly, I am looking forward to
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you as soon as possible. Best regards, My Phuong
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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