Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have a greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answer.

The view that

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are better parents than

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has shown itself to be true throughout history.

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is not to say that

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are not of importance in

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indeed, they are the most necessary if

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are to appreciate fully the roles of both sexes. But

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have proven themselves

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of their conditioning, their less aggressive natures and their generally better

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skills. From the time they are little

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, females learn about nurturing.

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with dolls and later perhaps with younger brothers and sisters,

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are given the role of carer.

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see their mothers in the same roles and so it is natural that they identify

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as a female activity. Boys,

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, learn competitive roles far removed from what it means to nurture. While boys may dream of adventures,

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' conditioning means they tend to see the future in terms of raising families.

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appear to be less aggressive than boys. In adulthood, it is

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, not

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, who prove to be the aggressors in crime and in war. Obviously, in raising

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, a more patient, gentle manner is preferable to a more aggressive one.

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there certainly exist

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men

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and aggressive

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, by and large, females are less likely to resort to violence in attempting to solve problems.

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,

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tend to be better communicators than

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.

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is shown

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intelligence tests, where females, on average, do better in verbal

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than males. Of course,

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is of utmost importance in rearing

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, as

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tend to learn from and

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the

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styles of their parents.

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, while it is all very well to suggest a greater role for

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in raising

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, let us not forget that

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are generally better suited to the parenting role.