Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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some prefer having
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with the same point of view to keep the harmony in the
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, others including me believe it is better to have
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who hold different even opposite
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. On one hand, being with
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similar-minded
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similar
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minded
friends
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is
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peaceful
. Meaning, that the
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does not spend much time arguing and fighting about different issues. To illustrate, if
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members share the same political
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, they will hardly fight during election dates. Everyone in the
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feels the blessing of belonging to a welcoming
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that
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appreciates
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, and shares his views.
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, I think these types of groups are like bubbles that keep
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members disconnected from the rest of the community;
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, I am not looking to be with
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that match my views all the time. I disagree with
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.
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, being with
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who hold different
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is beneficial in some ways.
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, when
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with different political favours discuss any issue, they explore a wide range of ideas, which helps them all to better understanding the situation from all its angles.
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, if people are not afraid to disagree, they tend to give honest
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. Though, I
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being with a diverse
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, because it will help me being exposed to new ideas. I agree with
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opinion. To conclude, some people choose to be with
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having same
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because of the peaceful atmosphere among the
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. In my own opinion, I prefer befriending people who disagree with me sometimes, because they will open my eyes to a variety of arguments during any discussion.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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