People doing dangerous sporting activities like scuba-diving and bungee-jumping should be responsible for their own safety. Rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports. Do you agree or disagree?
It is considered by some that
people
doing dangerous sports
activities
such
as scuba -diving ought to responsible
for their own Add a missing verb
be responsible
safety
and rescue
workers should not risks
their own life to save Change the verb form
risk
others
. In my opinion, rescue
workers have the obligation to save people
's lives .However
, those who are practising dangerous sports
activities
need more education on how to protect themselves and be safer.
On the one hand, it believes that rescue
workers have made a vow and obligations from their line of training to protect others
regardless of the level of risk involved. In other words
, it believes that have adequate knowledge and training on how to rescue
others
. Thus
, this
should be put into practice in saving others
and theirs.
On the other hand
, it is considered that those who practice dangerous sports
activities
such
as bungee-jumping
should Correct your spelling
bungee jumping
also
be responsible for their own safety
. Thus
,this
can only be done if they have adequate information and knowledge on
the Change preposition
of
safety
act. Therefore
, rescuers can also
help by informing them on how important safety
equipment are
and how essential they use it . Correct subject-verb agreement
is
As a result
, this
would reduce or prevent them from and
hazards that might occur doing Correct your spelling
any
sports
activities
.
In conclusion, rescuers have the obligation and they are also
responsible for protecting and securing the lives of people
around them but also
those people
practising dangerous sports
activities
has
the right to prevent any Correct subject-verb agreement
have
activities
that can put their lives at any form of risk.Submitted by temitope.sabitu on
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