Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Even though social networking sites like
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or
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has created
lot
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of
oppertunities
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opportunities
for human life, it creates some
unpleasent
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unpleasant
impact on
indiviuals
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individuals
and society.It is undeniable that these websites have established many drawbacks
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can harm
people
in long run. From my perspective, I completely agree with
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this
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To begin
with,
social
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network has severe implications for both individuals and society since they spend
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excessive amount of time in those websites.
For example
,
people
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half of the day on
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chatting
casting
with each other,watching short
tiktok
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TikTok
videos or just scroll photos or videos on
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Instagram
.At
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these intriguing
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habit
habits
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fell
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relaxed and happy after that we would become habituated with
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.
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, these
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habits
distracts us from our daily routine.
As a result
, we withdraw our natural social interactions with others and convert them into virtual levels. On the one hand,
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network has created cyber
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crime using many websites. Bullies
creates
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lots of fake accounts to send
unpleasent
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unpleasant
and
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aggressive
email,personal massages and public comments towards others.
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Since
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it is very difficult to find out the bullies they
people
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violate
these
websits
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websites
and pour their waves of anger without taking any
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responsibilities
.
As a result
, victims are suffered. These type of activities harm their
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reputation
, they
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fear and
also
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dissuade
others not to believe in them.
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conclusion,social networking has created many
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opportunities
for
people
but it has some negative effects too.If
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government
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takes
imprtant
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important
stpes
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steps
against cyber
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bullying
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it will make
people
more relaxed and we should bound our brows limit so that we can save our time and give attention
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our family.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social isolation
  • virtual interactions
  • mental health
  • feelings of inadequacy
  • anxiety
  • depression
  • misinformation
  • destabilize
  • privacy concerns
  • data breaches
  • productivity
  • foster connections
  • educational content
  • social activism
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