More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communication

The communication

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Communication

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between persons is now regularly done through the aid of technological inventions.

Although

,

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technology

has made interactions between people easier and faster, it has

also

created distance in close relationships and a chance of data manipulation all over the internet. Since the invention of technological gadgets

such

as computers,

smart phones

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smartphones

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as well as social media platforms like Whatsapp or Instagram, the interaction between individuals has taken a new dimension.

Firstly

, it is now easier to send whatsoever message to a person and even to a wider range of persons. Sensitization on precautionary measures to combat the

spread

of the

corona virus

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coronavirus

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was easily achieved all over the world

for instance

.

Secondly

, it no longer takes months or years to head from someone in a distant land as opposed to what was before

technology

took over. To send a letter to a loved one either a family member or a spouse or even a friend is now much

more

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faster and quickly done. For

an

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example, it takes only a mail to know about the welfare of a person

who

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we want to keep in touch with. The

spread

of news and messages is now faster and easier through the

use

of

technology

. There are setbacks

technology

has in communication despite its benefits.

Firstly

, is

the

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high chance of data manipulation. Most of the information on the internet can be easily falsified with the intention of deceiving the general population. An example is the

spread

of an alleged salt and water therapy, thought to prevent the

spread

of

Ebola

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the Ebola

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virus during its outbreak.

This

false news which made rounds all over

the

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Whatsapp took the lives of so many in return especially the elderly.

Secondly

, there is

also

a distance in close relationship

as a result

of the wide

use

of

technology

. People no longer choose to visit families or even friends as it is considered a waste of time.

This

however

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, creates

a rifts

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a rift

rifts

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in bonds that once existed with

proximity

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the proximity

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in

such

instances. The risk of data manipulation is paramount and the rift in relationships can be experienced with the snowballing

use

of

technology

on communication. In conclusion,

although

, it can be attested

to

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that the

use

of

technology

has made interactions easier and faster with no delay at all, the risk of wrong information being

spread

is high and

also

the loss of close relationships is evident.