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Most people believe that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Nowadays, we are witnessing road accidents, traffic violations and damaging public properties in many ways. To prevent these violations should implicate severe laws by the government itself. I believe heavy fines and long-term sentences will help to bring down motoring offences and maintain road safety for
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 and drivers. On the one hand, most accidents are happening by mistakes and ignoring the laws that could easily be controlled.
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, speeding, taking calls/eating while driving, driving in the wrong lane, taking a turn without a signal are the most common errors made by the drivers. So by causing these offences are damaging to the
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 and properties in dreadful ways like losing life, long-term injuries and loss of valuable assets. By imposing heavy penalties and long-term imprisonment could keep safe driving and maintain a quality transportation system.
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, punishment deterring traffic crimes is not the best way and it leads to an unfavourable choice for
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.
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, a person's behaviours and attitudes can not be controlled by the law and it causes disturbance among the public. Laws must be reasonable and fair for each violation done.
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, courts can order the volunteering works for simple abuse like jaywalking, ignoring road signs while jail sentence for hit-and-run, damaging person life. To conclude, many
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 think forcing strict punishment could deter traffic violations and others prefer the law must be based on the nature of the violation. I agreed with a hard punishment solution to prevent most crimes except for others.
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