Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore certain jobs which are not suitable for women What is you opinion?
People have different opinions about
gender
equality. Some insist that there are Use synonyms
men
centric jobs that are not for Use synonyms
women
. Use synonyms
Conversely
, there are people who Linking Words
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for equality in Change the verb form
advocate
workforce
. I will accord with the latter. In the upcoming Add an article
the workforce
paragraphs
I will put forth my views in detail.
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,paragraphs
To begin
with, physical strength is no longer relevant in the present job market. Traditionally Linking Words
men
's strength is the driving force for some of the industries but with the advancements in Use synonyms
the
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apply
technology
there are tools that replaced Add a comma
,technology
the
muscle power. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, in the olden days, the construction industry mainly employed Linking Words
men
, as they have to light heavy metals and mix the concrete but now tools like cranes & mixers Use synonyms
makes
the job easy. Change the verb form
make
Therefore
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women
can participate in any industry that they have Use synonyms
interest
in without any constraints.
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an interest
Additionally
, Linking Words
now a days
most of the jobs Correct the word
nowadays
requires
skills that Change the verb form
require
requires
technical prowess. Cognitive skills are Change the verb form
require
Use synonyms
gender neutral
and to excel in a profession, it needs interest and passion for the work. Add a hyphen
gender-neutral
Women
and Use synonyms
men
both possess Use synonyms
the
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apply
problem solving
skills and can finish the tasks. Add a hyphen
problem-solving
For example
, almost 50% of the software employees in Linking Words
the
silicon valley are Correct article usage
apply
women
, companies like google are encouraging more Use synonyms
women
to join their company. Thereby, in today's day and age discriminating a Use synonyms
gender
based on the work is illogical.
Use synonyms
Hence
, to conclude, I would like to iterate my opinion that both Linking Words
the
sexes are equal and Correct article usage
apply
women
should not be denied Use synonyms
opportunties
based on their Correct your spelling
opportunities
gender
Use synonyms
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