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Ordinary People Try to copy famous people either reading magazines or watching TV. Why do they do this. Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people

#people #copy #magazines #tv #idea
Nowadays,
people
 are influenced by many
well known
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personality
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personalities
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, who became popular by TV or/and magazines. Considering
this
 act will give a clear-cut direction and motivation to the folks.
Therefore
, I strongly support the given notion.
To begin
 with, following good characters will assist to add colours in monochromic life and shape
to
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the future. Many talented and successful
people
 have meaningful life to learn.
That is
 why
,
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 many do admire outstanding
one
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ones
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. Apart from
this
, many legends have various vision to see the world differently, so
this
 directly helps
people
 to see the
glob
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globe
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 with
different
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 spectrum.
For instance
,
people
 do follow the great successful person
such
 as
:
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Dr.
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 Abdul Kalam, Barak Obama, Narendra Modi and many more.
Hence
, it is advisable that every have to keep
a
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achiver
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achiever
 who has
bizzare
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bizarre
 personality.
Furthermore
,
by
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keeping
such
personality
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a personality
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 as our role model, will motivate us and boost the confidence in order to achieve goals, as they provide a
well defined
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 direction.
Thus
,
people
 don't have to create
new
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 path,
instead
 of it they can blindly walk through it.
However
, the idea has proven wrong. As
people
 can not identify true ideals.
Hence
, they misguided and faces ample
of
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failures.
For instance
, toddlers and kids are not enough mature to decide
whome
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whom
who
to
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follow, unfortunately, they choose
wrong
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people
 and experience awful circumstances. To recapitulate, keeping good fellows as an ideal will lead an individual to achieve
plethora
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 of success
untill
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until
 unless an individual
have
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 a right and correct choice,
otherwise
, they have to face consequences.
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