Ordinary People Try to copy famous people either reading magazines or watching TV. Why do they do this. Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people

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Nowadays,
people
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are influenced by many
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personality
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, who became popular by TV or/and magazines. Considering
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act will give a clear-cut direction and motivation to the folks.
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, I strongly support the given notion.
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with, following good characters will assist to add colours in monochromic life and shape
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the future. Many talented and successful
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have meaningful life to learn.
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why
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many do admire outstanding
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. Apart from
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, many legends have various vision to see the world differently, so
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directly helps
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to see the
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with
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spectrum.
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,
people
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do follow the great successful person
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as
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Dr.
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Abdul Kalam, Barak Obama, Narendra Modi and many more.
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, it is advisable that every have to keep
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achiver
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achiever
who has
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bizarre
personality.
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,
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keeping
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personality
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a personality
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as our role model, will motivate us and boost the confidence in order to achieve goals, as they provide a
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direction.
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,
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don't have to create
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path,
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of it they can blindly walk through it.
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, the idea has proven wrong. As
people
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can not identify true ideals.
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, they misguided and faces ample
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failures.
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, toddlers and kids are not enough mature to decide
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whom
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follow, unfortunately, they choose
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people
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and experience awful circumstances. To recapitulate, keeping good fellows as an ideal will lead an individual to achieve
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of success
untill
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until
unless an individual
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a right and correct choice,
otherwise
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, they have to face consequences.
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