As a result of electronic inventions such as computer and television, people do less physical activities and this is having a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Due to the inventions of electronic devices

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as computers and smartphones, people tend to do fewer physical activities.

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tendency has a negative effect on their well-being. I absolutely agree with that statement as an electronic device promotes a detrimental lifestyle and harms important parts of the human's

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, a lot of hours is spent in front of the screens. Long screen time promotes a sedentary lifestyle which causes serious diseases

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as diabetes, cancer, obesity, etc.

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, it has an adverse effect on eyesight. A prime example would be Japan. Being a high-tech country, the number of people wearing eyeglasses is soaring due to the excessive usage of electronic devices.

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number is especially high among youngsters and kids.

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, the lack of movement and physical activities is negative for the spine and core.

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, a great number of issues with health derives from the mentioned parts of the human's

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, without a proper blood

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it is quite difficult for the

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to regulate water balance, digest minerals and eliminate potentially dangerous viruses.

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, recent scientific studies show that individuals avoiding an active lifestyle have 60% more chances of getting ill. In conclusion, I am absolutely convinced that modern devices adversely affect people's health as they distort the work of the human's

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in many aspects and force spending a lot of time in front of the screens. I would recommend limiting the time for using electronic gadgets and computers, especially for children.