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Some people think that full-time university students should spend a lot of time studying , but it is also essential to have other activities , do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?

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Full-time
students
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 indeed need to learn, because
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 is their task in school. As full-time
college
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students
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, they need to obtain the required credits, complete essays, and
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 graduate to acquire degrees, to be worthy of their education fees. But full-time
college
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students
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 can't ignore other activities. After all, compared with those part-time
students
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, full-time
college
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students
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 are younger. The
students
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 need to develop social skills, and they can participate in the school's club-like debate competition and chorus, which improves social development.
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, full-time
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students
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 should
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 work out regularly. Compared with part-time
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students
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, full-time
college
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students
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' courses are much better than those of part-time
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. Overall, full-time
college
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students
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 need to study well and participate in other activities. They need to develop morally, intellectually, physically, aesthetically, and laboriously.
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