Some people believe that an armed police force would cause a high level of violence in society. To what extent do you agree?

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has been a cause for concern for many people. There is a belief held by some that the

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force which is armed would make the society become too violent.

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essay will argue against

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theory. For starters, the weapons that the

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are equipped with would give them an air of authority and a sense of safety.

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is helpful when they are confronted with dangerous situations.

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, when dealing with a group of gangsters, the firearm not only helps them feel better protected

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provides them with the device to control the situation. Usually, the sight of the

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with guns in the hands would put aggressive, fight-hungry people off. It is,

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, of great

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to reduce the chance of

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rather than exacerbate it.

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, there are strict regulations about the

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of guns by which the

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must abide. Before they turn to their guns in any case, they must quickly assess the situation based on their professionalism.

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of great danger are they allowed to

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weapon, and they usually have to write reports to their senior to account for their course of action.

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, there are

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those who argue that the

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do not always make correct decisions in the face of situations. It is obviously the case, but

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cases are just

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and far between. With all the rules restricting the free

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of

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, the claim that

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society has been at a high due to the allowance to

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weapons among the

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. To sum up, while there are certainly cases where

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the firearm inappropriately, I am of the opinion that

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situations do not often occur and cannot be the contributing factor for higher

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level in society.