Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people think that individual contributors and department stores have the responsibility to reduce the
amount
of packaging of products, while others think that the buyers should avoid buying products with a lot of packaging. It is indisputable that
plastic
packaging of
goods
is the main
wastes
nowadays and it is produced by the
manufacturers
; thereby, they should
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to
this
problem.
However
, the customers should concern about
this
issue as well. According to
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recent research, the packaging of
goods
is provided by
manufacturers
and supermarket. No one can deny that almost 100
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of
goods
are covered by packaging and it
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enormous
wastes
in our society especially
plastic
packaging.
Therefore
, many people think that
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companies should
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to
this
problem.
For example
, invent the packaging of
goods
that decomposed by
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such
as papers
instead
of plastics or renewable materials to reduce
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of
wastes
.
On the other hand
, some people think that the customers should avoid buying
goods
that
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many packaging to reduce
plastic
wastes
.
For instance
, the company that
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products with
plastic
packaging are banned by the buyers can cause
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pressure
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the
manufacturers
and it can encourage them to create
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friendly environmental packaging to draw the attention
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the customer again. In conclusion, I believe that both
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manufacturers
and customers should
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this
problem. The
amount
of packaging is produced by the need of them.
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better society in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Eco-friendly
  • Carbon footprint
  • Excessive packaging
  • Biodegradable materials
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Consumer advocacy
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Waste reduction
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Green practices
  • Minimalist lifestyle
  • Resource conservation
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Packaging alternatives
  • Regulatory measures
  • Ethical choices
  • Environmental impact assessment
  • Renewable resources
  • Compostable packaging
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