Zoos are inhumane and pointless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Love them or loathe them,
zoos
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have been part of the cityscape for over 150 years. Recently,
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, many have questioned their value and the quality of care provided to the
animals
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. Personally, I feel that
zoos
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are cruel,
pointless
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and ought to be phased out.
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many
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have made great improvements over the years, there can be no doubt that the captive
animals
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suffer. Not only are the enclosures usually far too small, but the climate and conditions are often completely unsuitable. Polar bears,
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, travel across vast distances of ice daily and yet, in some tropical regions, they are kept in small pens with only a tiny pool for relief.
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to
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discomfort, zoo
animals
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can suffer stress
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of being kept with unfamiliar and unrelated
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,
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the crowds of noisy visitors. In terms of conservation,
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zoos
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can assist in the preservation of endangered species,
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effort is ultimately futile. The Sumatran tiger,
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, has been successfully bred in captivity,
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, having been reared by humans, the captive population has lost its natural instinct to hunt, avoid humans, and raise its young. It would
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be impossible to re-introduce these creatures into the wild. As well as
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loss of instinct, there is
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the loss of habitat to consider. Urban sprawl, industrialisation, farming and logging all contribute to the destruction of habitat, meaning that even if a
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population of pandas or tigers were ready for release, there is, in fact, nowhere left for them to go. In conclusion,
zoos
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may be able to keep
animals
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alive but the quality of
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life is poor and the
animals
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’ future prospects are bleak. Efforts should
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be made to preserve wilderness areas to ensure the long-term survival of species.
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