in many places people think countryside land should not be utilized for building new homes. it is important to save countryside beauty.

In
this
modern times
construction
works have to face many challenges from traffic jams to climate change, so it is important to evaluate things before going for possible
construction
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the area and geography.
government
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often plan to build homes in the
countryside
to avoid traffic jams, accidents and over-crowded streets. there are plenty of benefits from
this
kind of approach as it is
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place available for
construction
purposes. with the increase in population new
houses
are required to serve
people
across the country. some
people
are against
this
approach to use
countryside
land for building
houses
and
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construction
projects because it is considered
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and
people
are attached to its clean and green environment. it is important to consider
people
view on the
construction
of building new
houses
because it
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the local population. its the duty of
government
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to use barren land which is not suitable for any type of vegetation for new home
construction
projects. and avoid any unnecessary changes in the
countryside
. New
houses
should be built as per the requirement but
also
keeping in to protect
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from any possible threat to its beauty as well as climate change of the area.
this
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energy approach which is new and reliable for future years to have
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free environment without increasing
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of
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. it will allow us to save melting glaciers and maintain
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of greenhouse gases under check which was the prominent reason behind
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of many animals and birds species. government should address all the issues wisely and provide reliable and conducive method to solve the problem in
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efficient way.
countryside
beauty should be preserved at any cost and it is in the
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interest.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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