Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes for example working for charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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People argue about the must-do free social service by high
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students,
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as joining with charity, taking part in social work and teaching young children as it is a part of the
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curriculum. Some people say it is a must, while some others say;
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should be only voluntary. I agree with the later statement. Making charitable
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compulsory subject causes more harm than benefit to the
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children. Because many of them are already compromised and overstressed with their academic work.
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to these, adding social service which needs more
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and energy indefinitely overburden student's life. Nowadays pupil hardly finds
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to even engage in sports other recreational
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which are helpful to relax their mind and body.
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, many of them are depressed. A recent survey in the US pointed out that lack of free
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and academic stress is the leading cause of depression in high
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youth.
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, social activity should be a voluntary one; whoever wishes, and has enough
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and energy should be allowed to do so. Social
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give happiness and satisfaction to the mind only when they are done with heart . Forced to do
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ruin the purpose of
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kind of exercise and take away the task satisfaction. If students are asked to do compulsory charitable endeavour they will do it without any involvement, just for the sake of doing it.
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will make them unhappy and ultimately turn them to develop negative thoughts about social service.
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, we can recall our memories when we were asked to do "siramadana" at
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how much we have hated it. In conclusion, the charitable task should be done only voluntarily
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the only pupil can understand the principles of
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work and enjoy,
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the purpose is lost and it causes more harm than benefit to high
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children.
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