Some people think that the government should spend taxpayers’ funds on cultural activities such as music or art. Others think this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, some countries

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been spending taxpayers'

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to sustain an artistic agenda

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as cultural institutions, artists and products from

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industry, partly supported by their communities. There are

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people that do not agree with

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policy, believing that it is a useless waste.

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, I echo the former perspective. On one hand, music and arts are beneficial to the development of a country. Cultural activities and

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can provide support and increase welfare because they are related to education and mental health.

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, if museums and cultural centres are available, children might find better opportunities to deepen their knowledge and research during school time as much as elderly people find occupation and social interaction, which might be lacking

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their daily lives and bringing

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consequences

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as depression.

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, nations face greater urgencies that need immediate and heavy investments.

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, the availability of

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can make

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difference with rapid

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assistance

and services.

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, if the health care system finds itself dealing with an unexpected outbreak or shortage of medical goods, the government must redirect its

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to support those areas immediately. In

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scenario, culture and artistic attractions are not the priority.

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my own opinion, the expenditure of taxes in the cultural industry is a financial strategy that assures the preservation of historic identity, expansion of access to education, sense of citizenship and

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professionalization

as well.

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, the cultural field has a pivotal role

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tourism, which contributes to the countries' wealth with visitors and investors. With circus, art exhibitions, plays, movie production, the population profit from entertainment and employment. To sum up,

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arts and music might not be considered as basic needs for some people that

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its expenses, there are more benefits than drawbacks when the

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reserve

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to maintain cultural attractions and its workers.